Chapter Chapter One | Cry Baby Luke by Jonathan at Inkitt
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Cry Baby Luke

Summary

Luke finds himself with who he thought was the perfect man and the man of his dreams But what happens when love turns to hate, and hate turns to violence, and violence gets mixed in with betrayal Will he survive in his world of torture, or will he get lost in someone elses

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One

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"I know your around here somewhere Lukey." The older man called out as he walked into his room. Luke clenched his jaw as he hid underneath the bed, watching the feet of Calum walk towards the closet.

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Calum's pov

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"I know that little cry baby is somewhere in this room," I thought to myself. "maybe he's in the closet." I pulled the doors open and started looking through the clothes and on the floor, but he wasn't there.

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I slammed them shut and sat on the bed. "I swear when I find you Luke you wont be able to sit for a week!" I yelled.

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I sat there frustrated for a moment before I got up to go to the kitchen to grab a beer.

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After a few minutes of sitting on the couch I heard something fall in the bathroom so I got up to go investigate.

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Luke's pov

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"Shit" I whispered as I bent down to grab the box of bandaids that I had dropped. As I placed the last one over the cut on my forehead I started to panic as I heard Calum start walking towards the door.

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I couldn't help but start to shake and cry as he opened the door. "There you are cry baby." he said as he grabbed my jaw turning my face to look at him. Tears flowed silently down my face as he looked coldly at me.

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He took his other hand and connected it hardly to the right side of my face. I started to cry more which only continued to anger him.

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"Your such a damn cry baby Luke." He hissed before landing another hard smack to the left side of my face.

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I looked in the mirror at my red and tear stained face before he dragged me by my arm to my room.

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He slammed me down on the bed and started to take off his belt. Knowing what was about to happen all I could do was sit there and cry while begging him not to spank me.

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Calum's pov

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"Stop begging you know you deserve this cry baby," I say to him. "all you ever do is cry and im so sick of it. Why cant you just be like other little boys and shut up and stop crying?"

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I look at him and smack him across the face with the buckle of my belt, and he holds his face in his hands. I pull him up then over my lap as I sit down, and start to pull off his jeans.

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"No daddy please im sowry!" He says as I lay the first couple of hits on his ass over his little boy boxers.

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"Your sorry for what?" I ask him, as I lay down more smacks to his ass. "Im sorry for not getting on my knees when you wanted to play." He cried.

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I pulled down his Spongebob boxers and rubbed his light pink ass with my hand. "Daddy are you done now?" He asked starting to get up.

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I hit him on his ass hard and seen him wince. "You know im no where near done Luke." I growled at him as he cried.

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~3 hours later~ Luke's pov

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It was now 11pm and I was laying on my stomach crying into my pillow hoping Calum wouldn't hear me.

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My head ached and my butt hurt. My forehead had started to bleed again and my lip was busted.

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I sat up on my pillow looking at the bruises on my arms and legs running my fingers over them.

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He was always extra rough with me when he drank, I didn't like him when he got like that and he certainly didn't like me.

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I sat there for a while pulling myself together before I decided to go check on him and see what he was doing.

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I got up and quietly walked down the hall and peeked into his room. He was playing COD on his PS4 so I started to shut the door to leave, but then he called out for me to come in.

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I walked slowly towards him sitting in his chair, and he motioned for me to sit on his lap.

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I climbed on top of him and he put his arm around me and I snuggled into his chest. I liked when he was nice and let me be close to him "Are you going to be a good boy now?" He asked. "Yes sir." I said sleepily as he rubbed my back.

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"Good that's what daddy likes to hear." He fiddled his hand through my hair in between plays on his game as I drifted off to sleep.

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