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Im TEASING, ok?

"(This is an entirely humorous review, please try not to be offended, as it's a joke.) First and foremost, the plot is very hard to follow, not much development or real action, you know? Also, there wasn't a single press of the enter button ONCE. Just three hulk sized paragraphs. I'd say it needs a lot of work, also wheres the main character? This could all pass as a prologue, and it's just an info dump so you know what's happening in the story going forward... But it's a great quick read, and I would recommend it to anyone interested in snakes."

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