Too many changes
"I've liked all of the stories in this series until this one. You have way too many changes. I don't know if you were trying to keep people hooked or what, but it makes no sense. You even did it in the first story with Kenzo. It gets so confusing. There are so many changes with no reasoning and that make no sense. The unknown perspectives, the quick turnarounds and having no pov at all from ruby and all of the sudden making her an evil villan that hates them. It makes no sense at all. Especially cutting out so many other characters as well. I feel like that's where I really started to not be able to read it anymore. I love longer completed stories, but I just couldn't push through the last of this one. I think your a really good author, but I had to give an honest opinion. I don't mean to be offensive. You had just been commenting that it will make sense and come together and it still hasn't even now."