88 chapters read
Insightful
"Seems to give quite a full picture of a victim. I am maybe wrong but I enjoyed it. Spelling is pretty bad but worth sticking too. "
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73 chapters read
Diary od a broken girl
"I loved it just some grammer issues and don't know how she could leave like that I would be cry and she had a hard like but she always found the good in it "
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59 chapters read
Diary of a broken girl
"Very good apart from grammar mistakes "
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31 chapters read
The diary of a broken girl
"I like the plot and the writer's style. It leaves you in suspense, but one thing I didn't like was the technical errors like grammar but on a general outlook the book is good. It's just what I needed. I'll recommend it to a friend . The book deserve a good rating so "
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70 chapters read
I don't know really what to think yet.....
"I don't know really what to think yet to be honest. It kind of put me off when it got to the part about her dad raping her, because I don't feel that was necessary. It could cause a trigger for someone reading, if they've been through a similar situation. It should have been stated at the beginning of the chapter under the title. Graphic content: mature audiences, rape scene. Then the decision would be up to the reader if they chose to read it. Besides that, it needs proofread, because it has alot of grammatical errors."
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