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Watch your step as you fall down the rabbit hole into this intense new world known as Hilo’s . Where everything in this pristine world is not as it may seem . Beth soon finds out Never trade your Dontae aptitude test .. expecially if This test determines your whole future happiness ..After another super virus ransacks the states killing over half the population. The government of Hilo's mandates to boost the ever plummeting population and lower divorce rates . An aptitude test will be issued to every teen determining their ideal mate and job. Beth Taylor trades her appitude test with her best friend she is in for a wide awaking . When Dallas Wade ..the guy she hates the most is her ideal mate.After their marriage's rocky start she realizes that their not as opposite as she thought. everyone doesn't believe Beth when she raves. that the chips within their Wrist's glitch . When pushed to the emotional and physical limits. beth finds out her pristine life as she knew is a farce . Her life morphs Into a web of lies and deceit . She doesn't know who is truthful and who is only feeding her lies. when the glitches drastically intensifies everyone realizes beth was telling the truth.how far will the people of floating island Hilo's strive for perfection?
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