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What is your opinion?
Stars
"I think that the writing, as in the grammar could improve and that it needs more practice, overall I think it's pretty good so far. Also yes I am the author the story, but it'll be read more of it has been rated."
I see potential so keep up the good work.
"The grammar is the biggest issue in the entire thing. You need to not Invision the main character as you, cuz I know u, and you need to let the character speak for her self. You'll also need to not butt in as much cuz that ruins the mood. For the cliff hanger it's a bit cliche and predictable so edit that. Obviously I'm not grade A author so u needn't follow my advice but at least consider it. I know this might be you first book so I wasn't has harshe. I see potential in this so keep at it and finish this book."
