Great
"Very nice story with a happy ending i really enjoyed reading it"
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"Very nice story with a happy ending i really enjoyed reading it"
"Nice story keep it up"
"I can’t imagine Indian parents allowing all these but liked reading the story please continue writing I want to know how they end "
"Wonderful and amazing writing loved it and waiting for more chapters "