Prolouge
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I was drowned, my head was swollen, my spirit overtaken, am struggling ,struggling with myself, struggling to stay alive ,struggling to keep moving.
I screamed but I was voiceless, my body switched positions, it twisted and turned, it rose high above the river , the water rose with me, and it got me thinking am I controlling it?
The moon is full, I hear the wolves howling like the wind and running in a pack. I saw a pair of red eyes looking at me, but the body remained hidden in the shadows.
I soared high up and the water came up too, I tried to get a closer look but the water pulled me back in drowning me till I was at the bottom of the river
My hair turned blue, my leg vanished and was replaced with a tail.
The water began rumbling, it’s like it’s fighting but with what?
A young boy fell in the water, he couldn’t breathe, I touched him and he opened his eyes, they were red.
He took me and swam up to shore and gave me a bite.
Am I a Luna or a mere Luna?
Your blurb needs working on. It's not that clear. Also, give the name of 'she'
This chapter needs editing. there is some punctuation errors and grammatical errors (try using Google docs and combine with Grammarly for writing).
I like that you have made an effort in your description. There are some things you should consider changing. since she was drowning, she wouldn't see much around her because of the panic. Then you said she is drowning in the sea, a river would have been better since rivers tend to pass through forests.
I really enjoy your work! Do you have any social media or email where I can keep up with your latest creations? It would be great to be in touch.