Diamond in the Rough

"I loved the storyline, especially that it was in first person. Can't wait to read their next phase in life. Hopefully it will have some arguments (or disagreements rather) that we can see them work through. And also how Carsten and Golden's relationship goes. The only thing would be better grammar, for it was hard to follow in done parts because of lack of punctuation or worrying spelling of words. Other than that, I loved it! "