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Forever Yours

"I love your creativity. A true definition of a dark romance novel. A rollercoaster of emotions and drama. I feel bad for Jade though 😥. I would've wished she was stronger and their outcome different. But then again, through this you learn that nobody knows about tomorrow. Cherish each moment with you have. "

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"Good so far"

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Forever Yours

"Personally i loved this novel and i really want to congratulate Ness for creating such an beautiful story. As to the story, the fact that i started reading it while it wasn't finished yet, was a bit hard, because is such a great story and not having it complete, could kind of break the rythm of the reading, nevertheless, it doesn't take away in any way the incredible feeling this novel gives, i got so emotionally involved, that i cried at the end, so if you enjoy dark romance novels with that erotic touch, this novel is definitely for you... Get carried away with the story and the emotion that will make you feel, no matter what other reviews say, since the beginning of the novel, it's warned that is not a story appropriate for everyone and that you should expect mature content and a dark romance, so having said that, once again, congratulations Ness for creating such an incredible story and i look forward to be able to read more of your work."

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Forever yours

"Interesting story"

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Forever Yours

"OMG...seriously Jade is pathetic, between these two stupid men no one deserve her, they both abused and disrespected her, she sure needs to wipe of her tears and bury her father then run far away from these ppl."

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Forever Yours

"Ness I love this story the plot and the characters The twists and turns are awesome. But I need for Jade to stop being so weak because now it’s to men making her life miserable and sister now included. Make her stronger and able to fight for her rightful place she deserves it after all. But that’s just my way of thinking l enjoy whatever you write ✍️ it’s your style and I love it Thank you for the update and I like here in Inkitt but still keeping Wattpad. Take care👌"

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EROTIC AND SEXY DEF A MUST READ

"I LOVE THIS STORY ON WATTPAD I MADE THIS ACCOUNT TO FOLLOW IT ON HERE THANK YOU AUTHOR "

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Oh My The Webs That Surround Us!

"I'd suggest this story to someone who doesn't wear their heart on their sleeve..its so emotional other wise (I've been a wreck here at home ups and downs. & Twists and turns.)you will be destroyed "

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Sin

"Its nice so far ..."

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Very interesting

"Couldn't put the book down. Why won't she visit cedric"

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Worst book ever....

"It was great until halfway....depressing and regret reading it...i will not recommend it unless you want to be depress....such a waste of time reading it...."

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