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Good

"So far this is a great story. Keeps you intrigued and goes at a good pace"

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Great story

"I liked it over all. I love the characters and a fantastic story to read. The character Donovan was a little head strong in the beginning towards the main character Guinevere, but he wasn’t that bad towards the story went on. I can’t wait to read the rest. TamV is an excellent writer. "

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Falter

"This story would be more suited to young adults, though I did find my interest heightening the longer I read. Grammar and spelling needs definite improvement, but I believe English is the author's.. second language, and also that it is still a work in progess. Plot is quite good. I will be very interested to read more from this writer."

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