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"Very nice story. Great storyline and characters. Great read"
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Great story!
"I understand English is not your first language. It’s a great story, just use spell check ☺️"
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The Bakery
"I really enjoyed reading this story 💗💗💗💗"
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1234wac
"Love all the twist and turns. Looking forward to the finale "
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29 chapters read
Sanders & Lilla ❤
"Sweet! I love every chapter, the drama, the plot, I love how it turns out❤ definitely worth a time reading this:)"
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The bakery
"Thank you for sharing your story "
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33 chapters read
Really sweet story
"I read this in one sitting. Sweet story and loveable characters "
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The Bakery
"The story is not so extra ordinary but what I liked was it was short and completed right away. "
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Woahhh!!!!!
"This was a masterpiece. I absolutely enjoyed the journey though I did get frustrated at few points but I loved it. I absolutely loved it. Wonderful job author 🤠!"
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Good Story
"A very good story...its keeping me hanging."
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The bakery
"Poor lilla cant get a break in the love department"
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35 chapters read
Good little story
"Liked the storyline and plot. Had a little too much drama. I hope there is a good end."
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Sweet story
"Sweet story but has grammar mistakes"
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31 chapters read
Sweet story
"Needs a bit of work on grammar and spelling but a lovely story"
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