Inkitt
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"Very nice story. Great storyline and characters. Great read"

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Great story!

"I understand English is not your first language. It’s a great story, just use spell check ☺️"

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The Bakery

"I really enjoyed reading this story 💗💗💗💗"

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1234wac

"Love all the twist and turns. Looking forward to the finale "

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Sanders & Lilla ❤

"Sweet! I love every chapter, the drama, the plot, I love how it turns out❤ definitely worth a time reading this:)"

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The bakery

"Thank you for sharing your story "

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Really sweet story

"I read this in one sitting. Sweet story and loveable characters "

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The Bakery

"The story is not so extra ordinary but what I liked was it was short and completed right away. "

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Woahhh!!!!!

"This was a masterpiece. I absolutely enjoyed the journey though I did get frustrated at few points but I loved it. I absolutely loved it. Wonderful job author 🤠!"

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Good Story

"A very good story...its keeping me hanging."

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The bakery

"Poor lilla cant get a break in the love department"

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Good little story

"Liked the storyline and plot. Had a little too much drama. I hope there is a good end."

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Sweet story

"Sweet story but has grammar mistakes"

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Sweet story

"Needs a bit of work on grammar and spelling but a lovely story"

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