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Great introduction!

"It's true. I'm heading for Amazon to buy this book. It's very well written, and I'm excited to see how Colin handles himself. Victoria seems a bitch bitchy with the small peaks we've gotten of her. No glaring spelling or grammar issues. Easy flowing dialog and really great character development. As long as it's not crazy expensive, I plan to buy it as soon as I quit typing and checking my own spelling and grammar! Happy reading to everyone! "

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No 9ne luna

"Can't find the story on my Kindle .. "

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Please write more

"Please write more it's an amazing book"

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I loved the story

"I love this book and I wish it was completed"

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Football night

"This tlrating is 5 star"

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Its nice

"I liked everything about the story the author is so talented hope she will keep updating the story "

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No one's Luna

"This was really really great but I would like a longer book"

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No ones luna

"Her wold if beautiful "

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Great

"The story is compelling. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Loved It

"The plot was genius, and I adored the dark plot twist the epilogue- it was brilliant. I loved this, and I cannot wait to continue reading Ellie's story."

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"These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook."

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Great

"Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html"

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No one's Luna

"It was very refreshing and different for me. . If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Superb

"No One's Luna is amazing, and I am definitely team Colin. My only disappointment with this book is that I have to go buy it on Amazon to finish reading it..."

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Amazing

"i am completely hooked but sadly the entire book isnt here..."

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reading

"well it very pretty writing style I really want to buy the book on amazon and it makes me be happy when I read this book"

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No one's Luna

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