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I love it

"I love it no dislike it took me high you are a good writer it's so romantic But am a bit scared of sex cuz it's painful as stated though "

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Great work

"Keep it up "

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Sweet

"Sweet and beautiful story,plz update a bil fsat."

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It's a beautiful story,I you are a awesome writer, the words you choose are like classic Indian fairytale from today onward you are my favorite writer bless you

"It's beautiful Indian fairy tell story with a classic chosen words you are a awesome writer I look more forward to see you with your gret work God bless you"

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Nyc story pretty interesting 🤩❤️👌

"I like the way the author decribe each and every scenery "

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There's potential.

"There's potential in this story, however there is a bigger need for improvement. The most urgent concerns to be addressed would be the grammar, and the writing style. If you just fix these two things, you'd be amazing. "

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The indian tale

"I liked the story very much I'm looking forward to read similar type of story "

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Good

"Its an average novel With an average plot Grammar is not so good Waiting for the end to see how it goes"

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Amazing

"Good novel and entertaining"

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Okay

"Okay story"

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