What is your opinion?
2 Alphas in One School
"I am so happy with this story it has a great way of showing people that they can forgive and sometimes even fall in love with the person they truly want in their lives. I also love the way it incorporated everyone and never left out any thing."
Two alphas in the same school
"I liked this book very much the fantasy is really appreciable would recommend to all my army friends"
2 alpha in one school
"It’s very detail and easy to understand. Also it was confusing and the scenes are very well described. Overall this novel was great."
2 Alphas in One School
"I loved how you emphasized the idea of how Taheyung getting the burning marks and said it coldly, in the beginning, it was from Jungkook. When everyone was wondering why it's because every time Jungkook slept around Taehyung would be in pain like-wise. The beginning also when Jungkook is naked on the bed tells you that he is a fu**boy from the beginning, so the way you used the two, as in fu**boy relation and marks was very well put and eased into the story. It made perfect sense. That was amazing work and hard I would bet as well, The transition was perfect between the marks and fu**boy. Also when that girl came in the Heart Ache chapter: 29 and tried to seduce Jungkook, Taehyung got another burn. I'm glad we can actually see how it worked (burn marks), and the power it had on Taehyung. So guessing all the other times it was much worse seeing as this was his mate. The transition was also well, to bring back a former ex of Jungkook to relapse their relationship not just with Taheyung but with everyone..that was perfection. In my opinion, it would've been even more intense if in the Heart Ache chapter: 29 after Taehyung had gotten into a comma and everyone was beating Jungkook up as he tried to apologize, Is if Jungkook had run away after he had gotten caught at the wrong time and wrong place with that girl. Running away in his wolf form hearing JK saying "You promised, how could you? You said you wouldn't hurt him again". Then the link turned off as Jungkook and Jk ran into the night crying, getting lost. No one had known where they had gone and no one cared until Taehyung woke up, and they all started to ask where Jungkook had gone, etc, etc...I also love how you made a link between their wolves such as Jk being Jungkook, and V as Taehyung. Using their real names and stage names was absolutely amazing. I also love how this book is filled with betrayal with Daehyun and how it was explained to make perfect sense as in using the daughter. I also enjoyed how you brought in another brother that is perfecto!! Another suggestion I would've added in respect of a suggestion is if you added Wooyoung from Ateez. Because haha let me tell you, if you ever watched a video of Wooyoung being loud you would understand how much more funnier it would've been between Jimin and Jin and Wooyoung. What a bonus. Anyways, I stan you for being a true ARMY at heart and for understanding the relationships in BTS and putting it together perfectly. Thank You! Your an amazing writer, and should keep up the good work. (P.S, you should add more of Jimin, Hoseok, and Yoongis relationship in more). Overall Fantastico!! (These suggestions are in the mean to be no disrespect, and to give you ideas for future readers, Thank You!)"
My review of the story
"i liked the story very much, the plot was nice and catchy and i really enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you described stuff in the chapters (for example the house) and i always had a vision of how it looked with and without the characters. however, i did notice a few gramar mistakes and the verb forms, but everybody makes mistakes and who am i to critisize you? this is my first time reading a book by you, so im excited to read others."
2 Alphas In One School Taekook FF
"This story has an amazing plot line and they way the author wrote made it even better......... I don't think this story needs any improvement when it already has it.................... Writing is hard work as you might know so you if you keep this author you might become a publisher in no time which i hope you do......................"
Nice one.
"I recommend this to my army bffs, you guys!!!!! This book is too nice to say in words "
Nice
"Yeah its good.. N we are taekooker.. So curious about things Let's get it too it"
Lovely
"It's really very nice. I love this story"
