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Sad Little stories From Sad Little Girls

"It made me very emotional to say the least."

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Dance with me

"Great and amazing"

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I love it

"I love these poem, the author did a great job on them"

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My Review

"The poem on "Tears" and "Death" are both awesome!! They're both very poetic and well written. The rest, not really my style. The first poem could've been better if you didn't have so many repetitions because it was almost like reading the same sentence at least 10 times over and over again, just changing one line. Repetition isn't bad, you've just overused it. Great work though!!! "

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