What is your opinion?
Blood wars
"I love this book. It just gets a little hard to understand from the grammar mistakes. I have had to read the same sentence 3 times to piece together the correct sentence. Please, if you are unable to correct your mistakes, get someone who can. You have a great talent. Just needs some polishing. "
Nicholas
"The only thing I have a problem is the punctuation, spelling errors and the grammar in general like needing to capitalize names and keep to the same spelling when it comes to name other than that I'm hooked on every chapter."
Blood Wars
"I Love This Story! The Depth Of The Characters Is Truly Amazing! I Cannot Wait For The Completion Of Book 1 And The Start Of Book 2 & 3."
blood wars book one
"I wish the book was longer but it was good. Some grammar errors. "
Blood wars
"The spelling and grammar were a little off. Punctuation was very flighty the characters were described a little to incomplete. They could have had a little more background to them. The story line moved a little slow, then skipped ahead fast then slow again. I was really getting into the story and would like to read the rest. The time frame could have used a little bit more description. I hope the rest of the book and series improves, but if not it's still a great read. I put the book down and thought about it often throughout the day. "
Needs work but great bones
"First of all please go back and fix the many auto correct errors and name capitalization. I love the idea of the story and plot. The transitions are too fast and don't always make sense. I like Jessica's new attitude, but the reason for her demeanor change wasn't really explained well and was too abrupt. She is extremely abrasive now and always jumps to conclusions that everyone hates her. I'd like to see more depth in her character. It's great that she is strong and doesn't take shit from anyone, but she's now a one trick pony. It gets old fast. I personally think it would be interesting if the abrasive persona was an act so she could use to watch how others react and make better judgments about them. Then they will underestimate her, thinking she is all anger and brawn without any brain."
Love it, highly recommend
"Absolutely love "
