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Holy...Shit

"Goddamn, this, god i don't even know what to say. This here is heartbreaking and dark and it shows the character of Jason's semi-broken mentality Christ nice job on this"

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Ouch

"I can't tell you how devastated this made me feel. There is an ugly, squirming, grieving ache in my chest that I know will be there come morning. This is so unjust for the bat boys and I think this is what makes it even more sickening."

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