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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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Night

"I love this book the storyline is very good. The author takes their time helps with understanding. I can’t quite fit it into words how I can’t believe how strong Shayla is. She’s kind and loving and understanding. She’s winning their respect and I think some are beginning to like her. When Alx does tell them that she is their Luna I don’t think it will be so bad. Shayla actually saved those pups. If it wasn’t for her quick thinking they would probably be dead or kidnapped. Please tell me that there is more to this story. Don't leave me hanging wanting more."

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Night

"Please can you let us know when you will be updating this story."

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Hello

"I really love it "

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Night

"I absolutely can’t not wait for more of this remarkable story and to see where it leads each character! Please continue…"

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Night

"Very good concept with book. I'm enjoying it immensely. Just a few words like he that should be she and vice-versa. I only needed to read over again a few times. I hope I get to read the entire book."

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it’s ok

"they really need to learn how to spell it’s quite obvious that english isn’t their first language and i’m proud that their trying but spelling is really neded"

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Awwe

"Yes can’t wait for more"

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Night

"Very entertaining plot and story line. A few spelling mistakes , mostly missing letters. The story starts slow but reaches a level where the slow story becomes understandable. I do hope the writer continues with this story and continues writing. Thank you for an engaging story. "

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Good book

"Good book interesting "

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Great read!

"Spectacular plot! I’m looking forward to more of your work!"

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Night

"I am loving it. Can't put it down. The spelling and grammar needs some work but the storyline is awesome. Please keep writing stories."

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"Nice story, not the standard mate story, but unfortunately a story with many writing errors. Perhaps someone should proofread the chapters? Also it might be an idea to use italics or bold when the wolves speak. It makes the story easier to read. But other than that: keep up the good work!!"

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Night

"I like the plot and how the story is told Sometimes i have to read again, because sometimes i don't know Who is tankinhoud Man or wolve I would reconventie thuis story to everyone"

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Night

"Great read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Night

"Hoping there is a second book. Love reading the stories, but do not like being left in the dark."

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It's fairly good

"I believe the writing is good just the development of characters I would have liked to see better. Also the explanation if death of parents could have used more body and information as well as s background. Some parts of the story telling seems incomplete."

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Nice story

"It's a nice story "

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? Can't remember

"It's a bit confusing at first, with the two for one body, nice twist. The plot, kinda slow and boreing. Yes she's sad, in pain, a smart ass got it. Why! How! What! "

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