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Vampire maid

"It was pretty good need more on her being a vamp"

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The vampire servant's tale

"I really liked how it was written, I believe it's quite well written! Unlike other plain stories, I can actually feel the chemistry... "

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The vampire servants tale

"If there are grammar mistakes as the author said, I didn't really notice. This book kept me wanting to read more. I love how the author used wording like the olden days. It was refreshing to put myself sometimes into those people's shoes. Truly a magnificent book. I hope there will be more like this one. "

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the vampire servants tale

"amazing storyline and characters"

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The Vampire servents tale

"I love this story. It is just as good ad any other vampire story. Can't put it down! I hope he continues writing stories like this one."

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The kind super natural human

"I'm loving the flow, keep it coming, the grammar is somehow funny but i understand you are trying to make it natural "

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The Vampire Servants tale.

"I like it. I'd recommend it to my friends. Good story, great characters.❤"

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Interesting n simply beautiful

"It was quite a different one compared to the stories i usually read. So it was fine nothing bad but maybe its not 100% my cup of tea but slightly i guess. Like 50%. Nice way of expressing her feelings n emotions loved it from the beginning.. ngl got mad when he married that rich gal but felt relived after finding out that he never even slept with her nor loved her. Felt pity for her but she didnt deserve him anyway. Im my opinion the only gal who deserve his real love was FL. But the end of this story kinda gives me anxiety because why the hell now a new young girl here. Hattie or hettie whatever her name is well we dont need her. Sounds like trouble to me. But hope everything ended in a better way n FL n ML ended together forever. Cant wait to read other parts of this story 🙌🙇✨"

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The Vampire's servant tale.

"The book was well written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It just doesn't feel complete. There's info in the book that's a little unclear, or there are quite a few loose ends in the story, and the ending was very underwhelming and abrupt. Doesn't seem finished, or maybe things were a little too rushed at the end. Overall, it was very good work. It kept me engaged and intrigued. 7/10 would be my personal rating. Thank you for writing. "

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