Painted with Tears - Review

"I picked this one up because I was intrigued by the theme: South against North again. I know little of American politics but it seems to me over the pond that there is a very real danger of that sort of thing happening again in some form,. Technical point first: I would have had the dream section in italic script, that would have indicated to the reader that the story proper had not started - or at least put an alert out that something different was going on, Second point: I want some sort of info dump, in keeping, to wise me up to time and background. I am assuming that this is some time in the future and maybe a post apocalyptic scenario - I do hope so. You've got Kim Jong-Un to help you with that! Third point: I would just use the prologue as first chapter. Forth point: you mention armour and I am wondering what you mean - body armour i.e medieval or kevlar. Do';t need to name it, I just want to be aware in my own mind what I am looking at here, There's not much to go on here yet hence the rating so far, but I am certainly intrigued to look at some more, I think there are rich pickings here and the writing is lucid and unambiguous. Promising start,. If you feel like reciprocating I could do with some downloads and chapter reads: To Hell with the Harp! www.inkitt.com/stories/149100 Slippered! www.inkitt.com/stories/148145 Hair of the Dog www.inkitt.com/stories/147116"