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Poetry

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Summary

I’m not quite sure what to say here. I write free verse mostly I guess. Sonnets are my favorite but I’m still practicing.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Azriel
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

A Roof With too Much Weight ~ Sonnet

A traitor's only ally is his tongue.

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That fool's tool of power, his means of breath

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Used either to turn dynasties to dung

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Or like Judas to pay his debt by death.

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His whispers like peaceful waves do ships spur.

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He claims that they are wealth and glory bound,

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But how quickly proud vessels overturn

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When once calm waves turn into those that drown.

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Like Lucifer he coaxed me to confide

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In his hisses heard as wolf howls to all

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Now crazed I curse the gall with which he lied,

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But to fool's hissing did my empire fall.

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They'll collapse like a roof with too much weight,

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And from their foundations I'll build; just wait.

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