Chapter 1 prologe
It's a cold and dark night as the moon rises and its light shines through the trees in the woods. Her mother said ''Come along Sophie it's time for bed."
Sophie had just gotten done brushing her long soft dark brown hair and, had run to her bed. The little four-year-old jumped into the bed and looked at the clock on her nightstand. Sophie saw that the time was 11:11.
"Mommy look it's 11:11'' Sophie called out to her mother but she seemed distracted with something else.
"Mommy?" Sophie said questionably
"What is it dear sorry mommy is a bit distracted," said Sophie's mother. Her mother tucked her into bed with her black and red blankets and closed the door halfway and walked into the living room. As she walked the sound of the floorboards creaking kind of scared Sophie but this time for some reason it worried her even more, she felt like something was wrong but couldn't tell what was so wrong. Then all of the sudden there was a loud smash at the front door. She heard her mother and father scream "Sophie hide!"
Sophie quickly jumped up out of bed throwing her red and black blankets aside and, ran into her closet looking for a place to hide. Sophie remembered something that her mother had shown her it was a secret hidden door. She quickly pushed an old musty box out of the way and found the same small door that her mother had shown her a week before all of this happened.
I’d just like to say you should go into more detail about what’s going on so it’s easy for your readers to follow.
ok ill edit it up today but It may take me until later today because I do have classes all-day
I love the cliff hanger (my co- writer will give you a few tips later but I wanted to read it as well)