Chapter 1
Start writing here…
Share with your friends
Customize readability
The Light Of The GUARDIAN
All Rights Reserved ©
Summary
A thousand years after Jesus Christ was crucified, the Gods send Thiebe, the Golden-Haired Child down to reinforce the message of love and tolerance. The Elders of the Hungarian village of Crevenia are wary of the young girl, and they abuse and defile her, and hoping to keep their nefarious actions secret, they decide to sacrifice her. Sensing her fate, Thiebe issues a warning, “If you murder me, I will return and I will slay all of you, and I will also eradicate all of your bloodlines!” Thiebe is murdered by the soulless men, but wrathful Gods show no mercy, and Thiebe is resurrected to have her revenge. Over the course of many centuries, Thiebe and her guardian Ada eradicate all those of the un-pure blood, until there is only one remaining. Young American Kurt Slovinsky was just a babe when his father disappeared, and when he finishes college, he travels to Hungary to try and find out what happened to his father. He is lured to an isolated castle, and he meets Thiebe. Kurt is infatuated with Thiebe, for she is the most beautiful woman he has ever seen. He would do anything for her, although he is about to learn that her motive is deadly. Thiebe coos seductively, “Young man, I will grant you three wishes, yet with each wish, there will be a price to pay.” Kurt is about to experience the most thrilling and decadent night of his life, yet unknown to him, it may also be his last.
Let bjwhittenbury know what you thought about this chapter!
Further Recommendations
SandraHan1: You started with a very nice and slow scene setting, preparing the reader for what is to happen (which is why the story is slightly slower in the beginning) and then gradually increasing the dynamics, building towards the very, very amusing, intense and intriguing plot. I am impressed by your captiv...
Read Now
Christopher: So far the story is interesting though, it is lacking substance as to the insight of the characters. I would recommend shoring up the plot.
Read Now
dannyoppenheimer: In the beginning it was difficult to see the line through the story, but half way it was beautiful
Read Now
Charles Michael Lummus: This is a good read An Epic adventure well worth diving into for anyone who likes a mix of Sci-Fi,Fantasy,Adventure & Dystopian Genre a great story with a vast number of characters with unique personalities and skills. It's good plot and plenty of action and compassion with the age old fight of good...
Read Now
Xanna: I haven't read the whole story yet, but I already love it! The plot keeps you breathless from the very beginning. What I especially liked were the descriptions in the book: fight scenes, nature, etc. Everything is atmospheric and cinematic.It gave me the feeling of a good medieval epic fantasy.Adair...
Read Now
Enigma: As a lover of art and a fan of Frank Frazetta, I began collecting his cards of Conan and the likes of him, drifting off into other imaginary worlds, and even began my journey as a bodybuilder when I glimpsed the beauty of his female warriors. Fast forward to thirty years later—Now I’m a writer, and ...
Read Now
Callie: This is a book I will read over and over. I fell into the characters as if I were in their lives! The story development and character interactions and growth is very well paced. Readers who like the fantasy era will be amazed
Read Now
Jesse: Amazing story, I mean, the way you fall in love with the characters so quickly and eagerly wait for what’s about to happen next.. I finished it in less than two days. I don’t think I’ve ever finished a book faster! I seriously could not put it down. Especially the love between Mathis & Celeste...Ca...
Read Now
Michelle007: Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed.I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes).If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate.Let's connect on Discord: fl...
Read Now