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Wonderful, but needs more exposition

"I really enjoyed reading it, but there really isn't much exposition or descriptions of surroundings. Gotta remember that while you may know everything about the characters and world, readers don't. Otherwise, wonderful job!"

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the Raud vargr

"It was a great start to a novel waiting for more. "

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