What is your opinion?
River of Guilt
"Good story overall. Excellent story telling style, with a well thought out plot and excellent twists and turns. Imagery was spot on for most of the story, though I would have like to to see what the Star Lincoln looked like inside and out rather than the vague allusions that we got. One image that is still with me is Shepherd book as an advocate, dressed like a pimp from the 70's version of Starsky and Hutch. Good twist at the end too."
Very good episode
"This could have been a real episode. It was well written and you have a great understanding of the characters, their voices and motivations. I also liked your use of technical jargon, which helped ground the story. I got really confused about the egg crate, though. What's an egg crate exactly? I got frustrated at how you kept changing from present to past tense. That really distracted, in some places, from the quality of the story itself. Overall a very solid A-. Thanks for writing!"
River of Guilt
"For those of us that are still mourning the (too soon) cancellation of one of the best Sci Fi series ever, this story is so welcome! It is like watching an episode of Firefly. I could see and hear every nuance of the charactors' personality and language. Awesome story!"
