What is your opinion?
Free Association
"River is a joy to write, and you write her mental perambulations so very well. This story should have more votes! I am curious about the woman in the cage, screaming, and I'm guessing this is only a glimpse at a much longer tale which, judging by your style, I would love to read. In spite of my own selfish desire to win this contest, I wish you the best of luck! I'm @alanapaints on twitter if you'd like to send me a link to more of your work."
Excellent POV piece!
"A very well-done snapshot from River's point of view. You captured both her intelligence and mental instability perfectly in her thought processes. What I enjoyed the most was the unique way you explained her reading ability, making it a little more scientifically plausible without taking away any of the mystery or making it mundane. A great read!"
