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Whao

"I need the rest!!! I need to know what happens when will goes to dinner alone!! When he tells them his family died!!! "

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Zazalou

"This book is definitely pulling all the tears out. "

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Update please

"I can’t wait to see where this story goes. Please write more!"

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Omg

"There is absolutely nothing wrong with this story. It is perfect. The grammer is perfect along with it all but god will they just kiss already 😭👍🤣✨😏"

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Abandoned

"The book is amazing but I don't like how its cut short was really looking forward to finding out how it ends "

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Mishti

"Great novell!! Waiting desperately for the rest"

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Rubber band

"It’s a very good story. I get a clear understanding of the two main characters- painfully so, as far as Will goes. Hope you do happy endings!!!"

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Rubberband by Jade

"So far it's very sad, but I believe once they reconnect it will get better. At least I hope so before Will does something to somebody or himself just to get away from his pain. Oh, and the Uncle should overdose already....just saying "

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Rubber bands

"I dislike that the book ended to quickly with out the main characters falling in love if it was longer it would be better "

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Rubber band

"I liked it"

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Rubber band

"Hey, I've never written one of these review-thingies before, but I hope this will suffice. 1) Your grammar is on point. Thank the heavens above! Because there are so many amazing books with awesome plots and characters, but grammar makes all the difference. 2) Your characters have a lot of depth to them. William's thought process is very well written, and it's evident that he has a lot of life experience. Oliver has a very determined mindset, and he truly believes in his abilities to accomplish what he wants to. I love that. I can't wait to read about the dynamic between these two, as I haven't read them meeting again yet. 3) Your plot is interesting, and I instantly knew that this would be a great read when I read the blurb. It's not at all boring, and there are many directions you could move it further into. I can't wait to read more! 4) Your writing style is lovely. No random, stray thoughts that are totally irrelevant to the story, and you certainly know how to insert foreshadowing into your writing! Thank you for reading. :)"

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What ? Is it over ? Hope you'll update soon even if i can see last update was a year ago 😔

"Please update soon...i'd really love to see what's happening next, these guys are so cuute, even more if they were together 😊"

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Wow

"This is good shit"

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Rubber band

"Update please "

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Love it

"It has me wanting to read more"

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Love it so far

"I love it. Keep up good work, Author!"

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Breathtaking

"This book is amazing!! I really hope it becomes published one day!♡"

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Rubberband

"I love the story and the general direction it’s taking.I love the fact that we see the point of view of both parties and the flash backs.I also love the roller coaster of emotions that I am going through...I just love this book"

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Brilliant Work!

"Where do I even begin? This book is amazing! It has had the ability to keep me absolutely glued to my phone wanting to finish it to the very last word of the very last chapter. I'm excited for the next update. Ecstatic! The author has done a superb job in truly describing the characters and allowing the reader to become attached them. To feel sympathetic towards Will and to hope for Oliver to be able to reconnect with Will. I am absolutely in love with this book and it's characters. Obsessed even."

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