The Eternal Peace by Hardik at Inkitt
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The Eternal Peace

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Summary

Spells are something the whole world wants but, sometimes it can be very dangerous. Misuse of spells can also lead to a great destructive society.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

It was a cold night, When I saw him. A kid in front of a tree trying to learn a spell. He was trying to use a Fire Blizzard Spell. He saw me and asked me that, “Do you know this spell?” I said,” Yes.” He asked me to show that spell to him. I showed the spell and it gave us relief from the cold. Then I told him the trick for this spell and continued on my way to home. After 10 - 15 minutes, I heard a screaming of someone saying, “YES!” I thought that he has done it.

When I reached home, a small blizzard started. I thought of the kid who I met earlier and started thinking that is he at his home or not. After few hours, the blizzard started to grow. I was now getting worried of that kid. I went to check on him. I wore a coat and went to the park. I saw that the kid was still there trying to do the spell. I told him that, “You should go home now kid.” He replied, “I won't go back until I master this spell.”

Then I asked him, “So why you screamed 'YES'?” He told me that some other guy was here and he was trying to do a normal tree cutting spell and, he did it on his first try.

I told that kid to go home and practice it tomorrow. He told that he didn’t had any home. He was all alone and his parents died when he was at the age of 3. He spent his days living in an orphanage and one day he ran from there to learn magic.

I felt pity for the kid because my story is similar to his. I asked him to at least go somewhere and take shelter. He replied with a clear no. I told him, “Then stay here and you will die because of the blizzard.” He then asked for some place to stay.

I had no suggestion for him. He asked me to stay at my place. I told yes for that. I asked his name and he replied, “Mike.”

We came at my home and I turned the heater on. He asked me, “Why are we not allowed to do spells outside of the Eternals?”. I replied, “Because the law of the Eternals has specified that the magic should not reach in the outer world. If it reached the outer world, then The Eternals would be destroyed.” He was shocked after listening this. I gave him a cup of tea and prepared a bed for him in the dinning room. We slept after 20 - 25 minutes.

The next we went to Eternals to give Mike a perfect wand. In Eternals, there were many different places to learn magic and practice it by dueling each other. We took a wand for Mike and went to practice and Mike started practicing The Fire Blizzard. He asked me for a normal duel instead for an epic duel which included high level magics. I accepted his request and went to place. The duel was going smoothly until he tried to use The Fire Blizzard. He used that spell and it actually worked. He was very happy and finally he could register for an official Eternal Magician. I had already done that years ago and I knew many epic spells. We went for an Eternal ceremony and met the director 'Shane'. Shane is the person who invented The Eternal Peace Spell which was being used to maintain the Eternals. Mike wanted to meet other Magicians but I had to go in an epic duel because my friend John had challenged me for a friendly epic duel. We went for the place and started dueling. He won easily by the Scare Of The Joker spell.

At the end of day, we decided to meet at the Holy river. This river has been flowing in the Eternals for more than 1000 years. I introduced Mike to all my other friends. John told me that Mike can stay in the Eternals for practicing some spells so that he can know the whole world of spells. John's idea was good and I told Mike to stay here for practice. Mike agreed, and I went back to my home for my daily works in the outer world.

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