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Another good work!

"Just like part 1, you done a great job on being descriptive and transitioning to the first person perspective was an interesting way to now focus the story on Lucy's perspective. Everything that was happening, I find it very easy to understand and relate. Most of everything I wanted to say was said in part 1. So far it's enough to get me invested and I look forward to see what happens next and if you ever need someone to check out your story's don't be shy to ask me what I think as I'll definitely check it out. Great job and keep up the good work. 👍🏻"

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