What is your opinion?
Erasing Christian Bay
"Please update, this cant be the end. "
Erasing Christian bay
"I love love love love this story please don't let Christian hurt Melinda please she is soo good hearted"
How then ... ?
"I really liked this story. But then it stops quite suddenly .. Awful! "
Absolutely incredible
"The book itself has a lot of elements that contribute to the big picture. I've never read anything hat has had me feel so many emotions at once. What's really nice to see is how in this novel you can see that people really do change people. She changes him and vice versa. This isn't your typical high school romance novel. "
Nice book
"Really nice book! I love the characters, they’re really lovable. The book is also a little bit more realistic than these types of books usually are. Of course it’s little bit cliche, but aren’t bad boy books alway. There’s some editing mistakes that could be fixed. If you love bad boy books this is the one for you! You can’t help but fall in love for the characters. "
Erasing Christian Bay
"I definitely like the authors courage to write a book. I did struggle with the grammar and word choice throughout the piece. I believe that this writing has potential to be great, but it would definitely need to have changes made. For instance the relationship between the main character and her best friend started off strong and had potential. As the book goes on it’s as if the author no longer wanted to write about her so she basically made the best friend vanish. I would also recommend a title change, unless the author is willing to extend the story line and talk about erasing Christian bay I suggest the title be changed to something more relevant. The tile is very misleading, I expected to read a book about losing somebody and instead it felt like a two man show. Lastly I would recommend making the parents react as normal people would, not as loosey goosey characters who let their child do whatever she wants whenever she says. It’s just not realistic for the daughter to be calling the shots in the family. When writing a story you have to give the reader something different, you want to stand out from the other books. Throw a wrench in the story line shock the readers don’t be predictable. All in all I do like the potential the book has and I hope the author continues to grow and expand."
