I thought...
I thought I knew you...0
I thought you moved on but you don't know what that means.0
I thought I was in love but I was really just in pain.0
I thought it was better to have been in love and lost than to never have loved at all.0
But guess what...0
I was wrong again....0
I thought you were perfect.0
I thought you were mine.0
I thought you were fine.0
I thought you would never break me.0
Guess there were three mistakes that were made.0
You, me trusting you, and our relationship. -_-0
Yup UvU0
I feel like I'm being weird but anyway hope you liked my first book? I think. welp make sure to write a review. -w-0
These lines seem quite relatable and emotional to me, but I guess you should watch out for repeating some words too much (unless if it's on purpose, which I guess is here). Also, I wouldn't recommend using emojis in your poems. Overall, I think it's good for a start and you should continue writing more poems! The concept is pretty good, so you could have a whole poetry collection on it.