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holy shit

"what is going on with hainsley and reese? i must know!"

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I NEED MORE

"I think the title of my comment is enough. But I love this story and I need him to find her bc that relationship was just fire. -Account holders friend"

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UPDATE plz

"Update plz!!!!!"

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Please find me

"Well you built everything up and left me hanging. It's like the movies nowadays, where at the end you just know there's going to be a sequel and then there is not. I like your style but there were several grammar problems. All in all it was a good read just not satisfying."

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Awh :(

"Awh. Poor Damon. To bad someone didn’t step in and help him. "

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Please find me

"Awesome story, can't wait to find out what happened to Hainsley. I think Reece has something to do with it!"

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Matalie

"Great story l love it"

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Yes!!

"Uh just wish there was more "

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Please find me

"Enjoying the 2nd part so f good job"

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Please Find Me

"I think the book is great. I am looking forward to finishing the book. I love that it has a plot with a conspiracy to it."

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Interested

"Is she even real or has she been a mind game they were using"

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Intriguing

"I will invite my officemate's"

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Great story

"This is a sequel but it’s a good plot. Are these chapters about the PI and meeting with Reese just fillers to make story longer? I like it"

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Tres marias

"Next chapter please hahahahahahahahah"

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Please find me

"Excited to find out what happens. "

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