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High School Boys

"I love this book so much. I don’t really have anything else to say except it has almost made me cry like five separate times and that is amazing."

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High School Boys

"This story was so beautiful. Chase and Blaze were so adorable. I loved them together. I felt so many emotions throughout this story, which is honestly so rare for me. I laughed, teared up, was annoyed at times, and was so overwhelmingly happy it was insane. The grammar had a few mistakes, but not so terrible as to complain about. This book was such a lovely and quick read! "

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Noice

"Very good plot development. Had a lot of angst but still somehow fluffy and wholesome and heart-warming. I will be sad once I finish this masterpiece. Very noice."

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Thanks

"U aced the plot twist in this novel bringing the tension and suspense, I like it no, like is an understatement I love it"

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Loved this story

"I loved this story it was great, blaze and his siblings are just too cute 😍 "

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High School boys

"Definitely worth reading, I love the chemistry in it ❤️"

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wow just wow

"omfg you are amazing (͠≖ ͜ʖ͠≖)👌 i loved this"

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High school boys

"Catnin4 I absolutely love ❤ this book !! Characters are perfect I look forward to reading more of your books!!"

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Highschool boys

"i think the book was wonderfully, the plot was awesome the characters were lovable and easy to connect with and feel. overall it was a great story to read i love it. i hope they keep making more books just as good as this one."

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Love the Gay

"I enjoyed it. Cried at the last part cause I relate to that, not going to spoil it but read it and you ll probably know what I meant."

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two gay crackheads

"this is so good!!!!! it’s very sad, but very real. the characters are so interesting and funny, and the rivalry between the two schools is intriguing (still curious about who started the fire at blackthorn). wild is hilarious, and i wish she could be my best friend. this is the kind of story that makes me laugh and cry at the same time because it’s so horribly sad, but so amazingly perfect. i love blaze and chase - i mean lyric and caylex *wink wink* - so much. seriously. they’re so cute. great job in this story!! the only problem i see is a bit of grammatical errors and spelling errors, but there aren’t many. - river/azu/azure 🦋✨🖤"

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a pleasant rollercoaster ride

"I am one of those who read along while it was being written. Loved the story but the number of times this utterly evil genius of an author gave me heart attacks is astounding. Could have been longer(i know I'm a selfish bitch but come on we need a sequel.) Anyways love the style of writing and how we have a backstory for each character and no background characters who are just cutouts. Would love to read a whole another book about Ryder and wild and the babe. May God be with ye."

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Highschool boys

"Thank you thank you thank you for writing. I'm so glad I found this story. Well done. I'm sooo gonna miss these characters. Be safe. I can't wait to read more great things from you! "

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High School Boys

"This was a great story. Typical High school love but with a few unexpected twists. The characters are lovable and you find your self routing for a happy ending that they all really deserve. "

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Love it

"This book was amazing I couldn't get enough of it I love them and am so happy with your ending "

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High school boys

"I loved this story from the beginning to the end... every chapter just leaves you wanting more 💞"

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High school boys

"I liked the simplicity. Nothing was rushed or forced and it made sense overall. I also felt relief to find very few grammatical errors: but I understand that they are hard to avoid"

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Addictive

"I absolutely became addicted to this book after just reading the first chapter. This book is so good and interesting that you immediately fall in love with it."

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High School Boys

"It was very intriguing to read. I waited patiently, but impatiently, for the next chapter to come out. The plot is nice, it reminds me of a very good professional TV show and I love that. Ten out of ten to the author.❤❤❤"

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A beautiful story

"I often get bored when reading and can’t be bothered to finish things, but from the moment I found this story I was hooked! This is WELL worth the read. I found the story so far heart-tugging and raw and real. I am completely emotionally invested in it. The characters are relatable and witty; as a reader, you really get to feel their emotions. I can’t wait to laugh and cry along with them more!! You’ve created likeable and believable characters that I find it easy to root for although you explore their flaws. It is also wonderfully written and I am in love with the writing style. I would rate this 10 stars if I could, but I can’t, so instead I’m asking anyone who sees this review to check out this story too :)"

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