What is your opinion?
"Time and Space"
"Lash_larue, fine writing skills, good story and plot, easily understood with character differentiations, The Grammar and Punctuation, excellent. You might want to give some time to describing your characters a bit more, also some info on the the transporting witch, who is now the best cook in the Galaxy. The details can come a bit later, as your story progress's rapidly and is well constructed............enjooyed your work and look forward to reading more from your library of thoughts................excellent william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/strories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive review me please"
Relaxing and Good Plot
"First time reading Fan Fiction which was exciting because I have never read anything like this before. I have heard of Fan Fiction and this has opened my eyes. I really enjoyed how an easy and relaxed read it was, I didn't have to be in too much limbo at all, the story was straightforward on who was who and what was going on. I liked the theme of a fast pace of conflict and introduction to characters. Enjoyed it"
