Inkitt
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Masterful!

"This novel belongs on the shelves of all good bookstores, it is an enthrauling read written beutifully. The story is well paced and accelerates nicely with relatable main characters and very hateable villains! If I had to find a complaint it would be that the main character seems a little too ready to abandon her home and family. Overall, it is believable in a way that a government may experiment like this but it does require a little suspension of disbelief (I didnt quite have to break out the tinfoil hat though). I really hope there is a second or third installment, if not now then eventually. As an amature author myself, I wish I could write so well. Well done and good luck."

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