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"This is one of the best written and quality books I have ever read. Everything about it was amazing. Thank you author."
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Unclaimed, The Moon Omegas
"The grammar, sentence construction, spelling and appropriate wording weren’t perfect but were understandable. This book has a hanging ending which is only appropriate for a book that has a sequel. If it isn’t continued then the author is being vastly unfair to the reader. I wish the second book was available now. All in all it was a very good read. It just stopped when things were getting interesting. I would have liked more background on the primary characters, more information on the war that created the society. And I didn’t see the poisoning coming. There didn’t seem to be any clues, it dropped out of nowhere. That needs an explanation. Prenatal vitamins are horrible, so that really wasn’t a clue. How did she know what silver tasted like? A metallic taste, that’s understandable but silver taste really isn’t. So the reader was just dropped at the end. There has to be a second and maybe third book. The Millennial Wolves left me hanging too. At some point authors should tie up loose ends. A good editor would also help. One book used the word smirk ad infinitum. WAY TOO MANY SMIRKS! Otherwise this book is probably one of the better written that I’ve read on Inkett and Galatea. "
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Unclaimed
"Wonderful story. But that end,., Please let there be a second book in the making? B That can't be the end of the story"
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Amaze
"your fans will really enjoy this book... If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
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Unclained, the moons omega's
"I really loved this and all the smut. It is unfinished where it left off unless there is a second book to follow. It leaves you hanging for more💜"
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Unclaimed moon Omegas
"Incredible book from beginning to end completely loved it wish it was a part two hated where ended"
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15 chapters read
Decent book
"So I love Alpha/Omega books. This one needs some help, I feel like with a good editor it could be amazing. The author has a good vision just needs some assistance getting it all together. That being said the Grammer needs alot of help. The ending was very rushed and shitty. I don't know if the story is truly complete or if it will pick up in a second story. "
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Unclaimed
"I wish there was an author's note explaining that a second book is coming. This was a good read but the ending was so abrupt and this story needs a sequel. Completely unique world and storyline created by this author. Not cliche or predictable. "
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Unclaimed, The Mion Omegas
"This story is marked as complete but is not a complete read there are no concluding chapters and no resolution to the plot just stops short of 5-10 necessary chapters poor form and a waste of time if left as is"
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UNCLAIMED
"INCREDIBLE STORY"
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Unclaimed,The moon omegas
"Surprisingly an enjoyable read though the ending seems like there's a second book but I don't see an author's note about it. Plot is really unique. I'm surprised that it's not getting that much attention but it could be the lack of promotion. Hopefully,there is a part2 of the story. PS. This is a mature read so try not to read in public 😂 it's very sensual. Smut lovers will defo love it. I mean who doesn't love a good story that comes with hot scenes 😉 It is a rare find on a free reading site. "
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NEEDS HELP
"Too much sex, too little story, started out great, went down hill from there."
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12 chapters read
Disapointing
"I started reading this book as an adventure, war fantasy plot. It turned out to be an erothic sensual violent porno graphic novel. The punctuation is very bad. Cant know whonis speaking. Many ortographic and grammar errors. Very dissapointing"
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Unclaimed the moon omegas
"Waste of time. No “real” ending. Why bother to write the book at all. "
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