Interesting and unique

"I really enjoyed this story. It is well written and absorbing. I like how you have appropriated the story of Snow White and gave it a whole new meaning! I think readers will respond well to the twist because it is original and the story of Snow White has been given a new perspective. I loved the symbolism of the apple and how when she throws the core down the cliff - and likens it to the death of her father - she is also throwing away her innocence in some way. I think you can do so much with this story and I am so interested to see where it goes in terms of plot and character development. Well done!"