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Iliyasu

"I love it so much "

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Amazing

"The twist is twisting ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ"

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We were just kids in love

"So far the best book I've read. Love the plots can't put it down "

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Boop

"I liked all the scenes so far and I would totally recommend this to all of my friends bc it is super entertaining!"

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We were just kids in love

"This has to be one of my favorite stories Iโ€™ve read on here. I love the entire concept of them being friends when they were little and making it to be High School sweethearts. I appreciate that there was conflict but he didnโ€™t actually cheat.i also liked that you made the love scenes more gentle and showed their connection, the intimacy and not just sex. I do enjoy the flow of the book even though there were some grammatical errors but hey they happen. In fact the only part of the book/plot is how quickly Rome recovered and came back and was allowed to be near Roxy or any of the other girls , and that they were going to let him go to college without anyone of the others to keep him in check. Call it cliche but that sets up the creepy murder-y guy on campus for me. Still 9.8/10 and I highly recommend "

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Jenk

"A good story so far with lots of room to all those relationships to twist and turn Plus being able to bring other players in the mix "

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We Were Just Friends In Love

"I like the fact that they actually got into a relationship having known that they were best friends. They have already this foundation that anyone canโ€™t just tear apart and I love them for fighting for love. "

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Love never fade

"Nice effort good story line best friends did not share bed"

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amazing!

"lets just say that on a LOT of parts i rolled off my bed and screamed into my pillows.. but umm.. i want my own naddy๐Ÿ˜‚"

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love this book!

"I love this so much already!!!!! Im not even finished with it!! :) your so good!!"

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Hooked!!

"Love this!! I am hooked, thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š"

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We were just kids in love

"I looooooved this story soooooo much......really enjoyed reading it...ty Author ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–"

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We were just kid's in love.

"Vere good book"

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Love it

"Sequel pls"

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Amazing

"I couldnโ€™t have asked for a better book to binge read honestly I have nothing else to add but great job "

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My best friend

"This book is well written, gramma, discriptions of people well written. Charaters well placed in the book."

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Great x

"I really liked it"

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Reciew

"Love the story I like the different point of views I like seeing everybody's emotions in a story so far so good"

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Kids in love

"That was A-mazing!!! I loved it!! Just confused about the part of losing her necklace. I knew she lost it when Rome kidnapped her, but when did she lose it again? Not really lose it, because it was with Nate. And if he modified it, how did she immediately recognize it as the one she lost?? Other than that, the story was just great!!! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ"

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Very good!

"I really enjoyed reading this book, I thought the story as a whole was interesting. I also liked how the different twists were brought in. Great job!"

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