Chapter 1: On The Run
I had been running for what seemed a long time. I am tired. I am in Florida looking for my best friend Jim. He will help me. He will protect me. I have looked in every bar I can find. I have been walking in the rain for almost two hours now. I saw a biker bar and sighed. I walked in and sat down at the bar. I noticed several men watching me. The woman at the bar asked "what I wanted." I told her a beer.
"I don't know what you are running from honey but for now you are safe in here. No one dares come in here and start shit. Especially with a woman. " I heard laughing and looked over my shoulder at the man. He had long black hair to his waist. I sucked in my breath. We looked at each other. I turned my head back to my beer knowing I can't let another man get close to me again.
"I am looking for the Wild Rider MC." What do you want with them she asked me. "I looked at her and told her I was looking for my best friend and his name is Jim." Honey he is not interested in women right now." It is not like that. I need to find him. Only Jim can keep me safe." Just then the door opened and I looked over and saw him.
"Kitten he said." I ran to him and jumped into his arms wrapping my arms around him. I was shaking. "Kitten what are you doing here?" You have to save me Jim. I can't run anymore. I had my arms wrapped around her holding her to me. "Calm down Kitten. I have you now." I looked over her shoulder at my president and friend Thunder. I saw anger in his eyes.
I walked over and sat in a chair holding Kitten. "Tell me what is going on?" I told him everything. I had not realized that his president heard every word I was saying. I'm tired Jim. If you can't protect me from them I decided to end it. I lifted her face and looked into her eyes. "What do you mean you decided to end it Kitten?" I can't let them catch me. I won't go through that abuse or the rapes anymore. I will kill myself first.
"Kitten who are you talking about?" My ex-boyfriend the VP of the Phoenix MC. His name is knuckles. He let his brother rape, beat and brand me. "What the hell are you saying Kitten?" I lowered my jacket and showed him my left shoulder. "I am going to kill him. That son of a bitch had no right to do that to you. Jesus Kitten you are soaking wet."
My name is Thunder, I sat looking her over. I want her. Her green eyes and long blonde hair. Her tiny waist, her breasts large enough to hold in my hands. And short. No more than five feet two inches tall. She is mine. Wait, no she isn't. I can't have a woman. She will make me too soft. I am a warrior, a fighter. I can't have a woman that can be taken from me. I heard Him tell her to take her jacket off. I hated the fact that Jim was holding her in his arms.
Take that jacket off and give it to me. I handed him my jacket and you could see the bruises and cuts on my arms. " I looked from her arms to her shoulder and I gripped my hands into fists, someone had branded her, I am going to kill whoever did that to her, to my woman." "Fuck, Kitten, I said taking off my cut and wrapped it around her." I started to warm up and feel a little better. "Do you have any clothes with you?" No, just what I have on. I stood up and carried her toward the stairs. I carried her upstairs and when we got to my room I put her on her feet. I handed her one of my tee shirts and sweatpants. Then I grabbed a pair of socks.
Go take a shower and come out here I said. After she showered and walked into the bedroom I sat her down and put the socks on her. I grabbed my brush and a small blanket and walked out of the room and back to our bar. I walked over to a table and sat down with her on my lap with her back toward me. I started brushing her hair until it was untangled. i noticed that the members present stared at me in shock. I lay the brush on the table then lifted her and sat her on the chair.
I will bring you something to eat stay here. I sat in the chair until I saw a bowl of tomato soup and grilled cheese sandwiches sat in front of me. As Jim sat in a chair next to me he said eat. I ate everything. "How long has it been since you got a good night's sleep Kitten? " About six months. I can only sleep for a few hours before I have to move on hiding from them.
You will sleep with me and I will chase the demons away I said smiling down at her. I looked over at Thunder and saw him watching us. I stood up and took Kitten's hand. I walked us over to the VIP table and said, "Kitten, this is our president, Thunder, Enforcer, Wind Rider, and our best friend, Mark." Guy's this is my childhood best friend, Kitten." We grew up together.
I met Kitten through her brother Jake. That made them set up and take notice. "You, are Jake's sister?" Yes, the oldest. I can't find Jake he disappeared. He told me if I could never find him to find Jim. So, that is what I did. Do you know my brother Jake? "We know Jake very well, he is currently out of the state but expected back next week, Thunder said." I could not believe that Jake had such a beautiful sister or she was standing in front of me.
Holy buckets of oats, it is a hell of a messy writing here. Holy shit.... I mean, the story has a lot potential but I am struggling more than I did with algebra trying do decipher your writing. when someone is saying something you use " " before and after the sentence. Like, for instance 👉🏻 The man looked at me and smiled. "Hi I'm fartface" the weird man said. 👈🏻
And you need to point out who's point of view it is. POV is SO damn important in books and you'd do well in learning that. Maybe read some books so you can figure it out or get an editor? Cause I've tried reading your other stories too but just couldn't. And that's sad cause I believe your stories has potential.
I just don't think I can finish reading this cause it's just too messy. It's all over the place. Every other sentence is someone's pov without pointing it out and without even spacing it in between.... .it's literally painful to read. And I don't like guessing and trying to figure out who's thinking what and saying something, POV etc.. But keep doing your best. I'll check in some other time to see if there has been some edits ☺️ If you find it hard to learn how to write, just ask someone to be your editor.
Your writing is so confusing! Switching POV every other scenting, and using the " in the wrong spots. Makes my brain hurt trying to read this!
Well these fucker never learn piece of shit needs to be tied down and neutered