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Adventure

"This is a great story! It is a wonderful husband and wife adventure."

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Wedding rendezvous review

"Seriously did not want this to end. Such a fun read . And a rather neat little bit of role play. Would love to see more along these lines. "

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Wedding Reception Playtime

"An intriguing tale, with both wit and scintillating scenarios. You have an amazing way with words, descriptive prose and original ideas. I highly enjoyed this read, and would also highly recommend anyone to read this, or any other of your storytelling . "

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