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Spooky stuff

"Interesting modern horror story with military motifs. I'd like to read more about the past of the main characters."

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Great Read

"Apart from the slow start and paragraphs being a bit to long I enjoyed the story line. The characters are detailed perfectly which makes it easy for us to visualize them. "

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A solid story!

"I was first drawn in by the cover of the story. I love stories where the cover fits with the work and isn't something generic. I liked the story overall, but it's a bit on the slow side. When it gets going however is a real page turner. I also loved how descriptive the writing is. It was very easy to picture everything and I felt truly immersed, like I was right next to the characters. I think this is a solid entry in the writer's portfolio and I can't wait to see what he does next!"

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