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Just lovely

"This has been a delightful story. When I was little, my great aunt used to read me some of the old late Victorian stories that she had from her mother. That aunt was born in 1900. Your story reminds me so much of those old books. Well done. "

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Sirene

"I really enjoyed reading it and would love to read the second book "

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Sirene

"Like all your stories this goes directly to the heart. Appriciate the deeply humanity at the heart of all your stories. Enjoyed reading very much."

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Sirene

"Such a good wholesome story. "

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Story of Ociana the half Mermaid

"I am really enjoying this story, I love Ociana's character. She is so spontaneous and amusing. I wonder what happened to Chandler in his past? Sorry I can't think of the proper title of this story and can't go back to see without losing this page. Great writing, thank you Regards Linda "

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