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Good story for 16 and up

"Ok very disappointing by not more but abruptly ending "

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So far Interesting

"This author knows where his story is going, a beginner's downfall is not plotting the story before writing it. Cudos! PLEASE run your chapters through spell AND grammar checkers before posting. If you plan to actually publish this book, spend the money to hire a cover designer. This cover is really, really bad."

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