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"Hey Dear! I really enjoyed the way you built the tension between Mboa and Milo, especially when she hinted about his age and promised to keep his secret. Have you ever thought about how powerful this dynamic would feel for readers in an ebook format, maybe even as part of a larger series on Kindle?"

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