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Natural

"Natural writer. Riveting page after page."

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The Real World

"I like the plot and the dramatization of the mother. I like how the mother is living through her daughter. I like how the story addresses heavy, real life issues like self image, familial problems, youth homelessness and the pressure for kids to have a "worth". I'm really wondering where she's going to go after she gets kicked out."

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