Inkitt
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A great but sadly probably a forgotten story.

"I loved these 4 chapters and waited the longest time for chapter 5 but it never came. The plot is very interesting and intriguing. I love the over concept and I wish to see more of both of these characters but sadly I do NOT think that will happen. I love how we see both perspectives both man and Orc on the war. I do not think chapter 5 will come but anything is possible."

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Continue, please

"Wonderful story about tolerance and final understanding. Only change a race and nationality and it won't be fantasy. Very good, psychologically correct, REAL characters. Usually I'm kind of "grammar police" (not native speaker so more sensitive to it) but here I practically do not care. Love the plot. Liked the idea and with every chapter loves it more and more, I newer thought I will cry for orc. Mother and orc babies... It's just fantasy fanfics and I cried over the little orc children. And their grieving mother. Thank you for this story. More chapters please. And good end and happy family for our orc girl, OK?"

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