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Mafia baby

"The story's are all the same "

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Mafia sweet tooth unedited

"I love everything about this book it's amazing I recommend to my friends that are older. I choose this rating because the story is amazing. "

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Mafia's Sweet Tooth

"I love Mafia books but I got to give it to the author I love the way they have that one funny BFF and I like how the Main Girl Character is such a sweet and submissive girl and the Main Boy Character is badass and dominant. I think the book could use some more funny moments and some main girl character savage moments. Keep up the good work I mean it because I'm in love with this book. This book had me screaming so much and I was smiling so hard that my family members were looking at me weird. But overall thank you for the good read."

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Maria's sweet tooth

"The author gets into the plot quickly rather than dragging out the beginning. Thus captivates readers to continue the book. The book is a bit cliché but not cringe worthy k I'd of cliché "

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I love it

"I love it all u done great job so far♥️😉"

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Gattino

"Oh young love "

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Mafias sweet tooth

"I love the book itself the writing literally everything the plot the characters it’s so interesting and I’m very curious to see what’s next I recommend the book to whoever loves the mafia or pove stories I gave that rating because again I was impressed by there writing skills and use of language Can’t wait for the next chapterrrrr"

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love it

"love the story line "

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Miss

"👍………,,,,,,,"

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Aggie

"For now I love this story but give mee more time to read more "

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I forgot lol

"Good , great , recommend "

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I like this.

"I want more. Hope you're doing great. Update this please. I really want to know how this story will go "

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I can’t remember lol

"The only problem I have is when it repeats the story from the other person’s point of view. If you want to give me their point don’t repeat the actions that have already taken place. Just give me how they are feeling. "

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Great story line

"Loving the story line, but too much repeating with the alternate povs"

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Idk

"I am writing a review to continue reading this book. It is pretty good.i hope it turns out the way I want."

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