nice piece of fan fiction

"I loved the series Serenity so was intrigued to see where this story was going to go. Nice sense of humour and captures Wash's character well. There are a few tense issues switching from past to present, a few typos and a coulple of clunky sentences, but we all write those from time to time. The quality of the writing needs a little polish but the author shows promise and a creative imagination. Over all I enjoyed the story."